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I sit
alone
looking out the window
pondering the white
and I think
winter is like glass
fragile and beautiful
still, silent life
a frost kiss
in my world of dark
and I sit
looking out my window
while the snow falls
and time stands still
the wind whispering
the clock ticking
and it feels like and eternity
but I like it
so different
from my dead, desolate dreams
so I watch
as the clouds come to play
the calm is a drug
numbing the brain
bringing peace of mind
the pit-pat of cat feet
draws nearer
as silence comes
to sit beside me
and I enjoy his company
for he, like winter
is my friend
so we sit
side by side
looking out our window
where time cannot reach us
and the cold is an angel
I wish
that I won't wake up
and my dream won't shatter
like the glass that it is
but wishes
almost never come true
and inevitably
I will wake
and leave my friend behind
broken and lonely
with only memories
but memories are like photographs
they stay with you always
unless you lose them
so I pray
my friend won't lose me
and I
won't lose him.
©2008-2009 ~Alyu
:iconalyu:

Author's Comments

Wow. I did this in the seventh grade, but didn't upload it. I dug it up while looking for examples to send to a writer's workshop. Think it'll be good enough?

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:iconcgtisme:
I have no kinda clue what the requirements(sp...) are for that, but I liked the poem! I think you had some good metaphors. ^.^

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"Billy was a hard-working cheesecake..."
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Black☆Star is just too awesome.
Accept it.
:iconarcthelove:
YES it's definitely good enough!!!! ^^ Very beautiful and paints an amazingly vivid picture.

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aut caeser aut nihil, Goddamnit
:iconkazejaki:
I remember when you wrote this, I thought ( and still do ) that it was so pretty and better than the crappy one I wrote.

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I'm gonna push you off the floor!

Homophobia: The irrational fear that gays will invade and rearrange your furniture against your will.
:iconalyu:
Aww, thanks, I'm sure yours was good.

I didn't like having to include the paint chip, though.

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"Political correctness is tyranny with manners."- Charlton Heston
:iconalyu:
Thanks. ^^

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"Political correctness is tyranny with manners."- Charlton Heston
:iconalyu:
Thank you. ^^

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"Political correctness is tyranny with manners."- Charlton Heston
:iconkazejaki:
Your welcome.

Yeah, mine had something to do with plums.

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I'm gonna push you off the floor!

Homophobia: The irrational fear that gays will invade and rearrange your furniture against your will.
:iconfleurbizarre:
oh. my. god. that was really goooooood.
very cool, too.
:) :)
:iconalyu:
Thanks. >w<

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"Political correctness is tyranny with manners."- Charlton Heston

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